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Before selling a mobile phone remove all data from it because it may contain personal information due to this we all might get unwanted calls......is this sentence correct...did i make any mistake?
Asked by jassy,
21 Nov '12 10:47 pm
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In the second line it should be which instead of this.
Answered by Shikha Aggarwal, 21 Nov '12 10:50 pm
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I dont find anything wrong in that since the sentence conveys the complete meaning .i suggest instead of removing if we can delete it is more safe .
Answered by joyesh chakraborty, 22 Nov '12 12:02 am
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Before selling YOUR mobile phone, remove all data from it, because it may contain personal information due to which, you might get unwanted calls.
I think this is a better sentence.
Answered by QueSera Sera, 21 Nov '12 11:46 pm
I think this is a better sentence.
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